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Your love hit me like a hurricane
And when it did, you made it rain
But babe, when it rains here, it pours
Right through my fragile heart you tore

Sucked me into your playful whirlwind
Round and round, so dizzy from the spin
Storm clouds grew, darkening my skies
Thats when I saw something, something evil in your eyes

When you shredded my lands
You let go of my hand
Your hand was my life support
Hun, you made me hurt.
©2007-2009 ~AbbeyLiz
:iconabbeyliz:

Author's Comments

Hurricane..=/

Not much to it, but it came to me quick. Just kinda poured my heart out, using hurricanes as a link.

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I still have no idea where this came from, I guess strong feelings = good poetry.? Then again I have never felt that way towards someone or been hurt so badly. And I don't think I'll let myself fall that deeply in love again.

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:icongetyourgrip:
excellent writing! :D

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconabbeyliz:
=D thank you very much! :hug:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today" - James Dean
:icongetyourgrip:
very welcommmMe~~> :]

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconabbeyliz:
=D :hug: :heart:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today" - James Dean
:iconalana-grace:
oh i really really like this one, a lot.

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the truth hurts, its denial that kills you.

:earth:One Love.
:heart:One Heart.
:iconabbeyliz:
=D thanks sis, means alot :heart:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today" - James Dean

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